Awe
By Tapestry Feline
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As the cool, gentle wind sent subtle waves throughout the lush valley's vibrant green grass, there could be heard the melody of the birds. The flowers of the valley came in all the colors of the rainbow: enchanting purple, lively gold, calming blue, enthralling red, jovial orange and there were even a few cheerful pinks; all were dancing in the seasonal winds. Every part of the land was thriving and lively, the valley has the lustrous stream that ran through the heart of the vast landscape to thank for that. A single, large oak sat in the middle of the glorious scenery, it was like a king and the valley was it's kingdom. During days when the sun shone down on the valley, the whole area seemed to glow an aura that resembled a fire that couldn't be extinguished; even at night the whole landscape was burning with the blue hue of the moonlight, and if you were lucky enough to catch the sunset or sunrise, then you would know that when the time comes for you pass on, you would hope theat a scene like this would greet you on the other side. One thing about the valley that is impossible to forget is the air: abundant in a fresh fragrance that seemed to have a cleansing property with every breath.
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A richly imagined scene. Are
A richly imagined scene. Are you planning to make it part of something longer? It feels as though there's a story waiting to happen in that landscape.
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a rich image, and description
a vivid description. Is it part of a memory, a special place you've enjoyed? Rhiannon
Couple of possible typos: when the sun shown down — shone?
when the [time?] comes for you pass on,
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Beautiful! My brother
Beautiful! My brother Jacques also writes mainly such very short pieces of prose. It works very well. And I love your rainbow can we share rainbows?
Right! Good! Tom Brown
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