White Space

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Mon, 2006-01-30 19:55

White Space

I really enjoyed this story, its everydayness, and insight into the male psyche. It rang true, the dialogue very natural. I am sure a lot of people will relate to this.

http://www.abctales.com/node/548744

Wed, 2006-02-01 16:45

Juliet OC

now it's got a cherry, well worth a read. Juliet

Juliet

Thu, 2006-02-02 20:26

2Lou

Really enjoyed it. No constructive criticism to give - thought it was excellent (ok, I did speed up over the football bits, but that's allowed).

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Tue, 2006-02-07 19:05

Mark Burrow

cheers chaps

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