The argument

Just wanted to say thanks to all those that helped with the questions about my assignment. I do appreciate your efforts. I spent several hours working on the piece last night, came on here today, read the messages and tore it up! Yes I know, thick skinned and all that... I think one of the posts shocked me, though I understand now that it was meant to assist. I took it to heart, ( blame the fact that I am being treated for severe depression). Well, having spent much of my time since in floods of tears I thought I should say thanks for your assistance. I will give your story line some thought...when my tutor said 'heated' I dont think he meant the second character to feel so utterly destroyed it couldnt say anything though. I might try and write it tonight if I can do it without crying. On a positive note though, you are one hell of a powerful and convincing writer. I guess some people spend years trying to be able to write like that, I doubt if I have ever read anything in my life that has affected me as much as that post.