INSIDE THE SILK
By BIGGUS
Sat, 23 May 2009
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Cool silk against my hand
Soft skin beneath my palm
Fingers searching, exploring
Seeking out the source
Of sensual oils
She had secretly secreted.
Finger tips touch waiting lips
Then enter to sweet labial bliss
And with deft manipulation
Of centers of erotic pleasure
I feel her body tremor
And but a heartbeat beyond
That primeval shudder
In hurried lack of ceremony
She bid me quickly enter
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I really like this piece
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
I really like this piece Paul and Love the ending; very good. I wonder is the lack of punctuation meant and if so should it be read at breakneck speed. Otherwise maybe a full stop after 'She had secretly secreted'. A small thing in a very nice piece of work. Well done.
Chris ;)
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