Suddenly Still (Nobody Gets This Right)
By ice rivers
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it was till it wasn't
it was all beginning
with no end in sight
until one summer night
He rejected her presents
As well as her presence.
He was no ghost
This had to be faced
To face to face
Time for a full confession
She asked her final question
Are you seeing someone else.
He answered that he was.
You're making a big mistake.
Probably, I've made them before
Yeah but are you sure?
I'm as sure as the top of the lake.
Haylen opened her car door
No further need to ask anymore.
Both humans knew the score.
Both humans had been here before
Yet both lacked the parting skill
The air grew chill; it was still.
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every man's dream
Yes Jerry, what is it? What is it we're supposed to get right? I don't get it. Rather criptic maybe it's a riddle. Then "yet both lacked the parting skill the air grew chill; it was still". Ok, what about "Quiet and still" yes good. Silence is golden. Every man's dream. So I'm told.
& Nolan
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