#masculinity
By love_writing
Fri, 18 Aug 2017
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Thanks for comments, this has been reworked for submission :)
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I never did, although the
I never did, although the later [latter] occurred often and in particular after he left. [I never did, but we did get picked on]]
You can't go any lower than reading the Sun. Good rubbish and all that. Loved it. Very concise but gives the whole picture.
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Wonderful word picture.
Wonderful word picture. There's so much skill in being so concise and dispassionate, and managing to convey so many complex emotions at the same time.
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Like watching a home movie of
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Like watching a home movie of the scenes in 8mm. You manage to maintain a distance between the telling and the action. Nice narrative style.
Parson Thru
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