A Slip of the Tongue



By MJG
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Dialect of my mother -
oozed from rain-sodden currents in Derry’s Foyle,
sailed from Irish Sea into River Mersey.
Windswept, weathered, sing-song notes.
Meltwater brogue of bogs, fairies and goblins,
smoky with whiskey, cigarettes and bacon, drawled around peat fires.
Tempered, fighting in wild lands and wilder streets,
tales of long-dead, ever-present Troubles.
A bitter marriage let loose her lips in Liverpool,
riven with gin and tobacco,
her coughed-up cadence
rooted in me.
In Somerset, my guttural sounds evaporate,
easy as mists on the Levels,
flattened like sea-salted marshes,
into a twang of mud-soft notes that dip and rise.
This mix of burr and buttercup vowels
among cider-thick tongues like acid on limestone,
jiggle through gorse and moss,
circle orchard’s lias stone walls.
Still, the north lurks, sedimented, marbled.
A slip of the tongue in my mouth,
un-snared.
All revealing.
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I like the movement of
I like the movement of language through this.
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i like your images of the
i like your images of the landscape, also how you link accent with water - sea, rain, mists, phlegm (!) How language like water is everywhere, acid or soft, salt or sweet, in the air, on the ground (page?) in us.The last lines I thought were about a kiss. But then thought about a child picking up their parent's accent of far away from where they have learned to talk and blend in.
A rich poem I enjoyed reading very much
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I'm so glad your wonderful poem has got pick of the week, and if you feel anything I said helped, as I have been helped so much by suggestions from writers here. You have made my day :0)
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Such a wonderful sense of
Such a wonderful sense of place and connection. This is our facebook and twitter pick of the day - do share if you like it too!
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Our fragrant poem of the week
Our fragrant poem of the week - well done!
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