Upon returning to Rochester, I ran into my good friend Jack who immediately asked me a rhetorical question; "who shot the deputy and did they kill him." I told Jack that I'd have to think about that for awhile and get back to him. This one's for you, Jack and your two sons, Nolan and Jacob
just below the surface
Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020
in the darkness where falling to greater depth is flying. We are only fearsome at the surface where we misunderstand and are misunderstood simultaneously.
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Reminders of unconditional love
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
bring us courage every time that we connect with them. A beautiful, heart felt poem that will touch the heart of all readers.
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simply irresistible
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2017
a few clean up notes
get rid of a couple "littles"
clarify this sentence" The look, in her mind’s eye, that right now made her want to her jump right back on one and go home"
seek alternatives to the word "seem" ( appear,...
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Jen
Posted on Wed, 17 May 2023
So beautiful so lovely so admirable. Proud to call you a friend
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Hey Jenny
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Do you have any Navajo blood? Thanks to your interst, I'm going to write a skinwalker story stay tuned.
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Congrats Jenny
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
Totally agree with poncey....we missed you at the reading.....your exquisite poetry is always inspiring and uplifting. Congrats on the award. Well deserved.
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Hey Mark
Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2023
You got style and skill. The combination of style and skill is like the combination of authenticity and validity, throw in an engaging imagination anf there ya go. You've got it all my friend.
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I love this piece
Posted on Wed, 15 Mar 2023
You would have been a freshman in my first year of teaching. I wasn't that much older than the "kids" I was teaching so we got along real well largely based on music and style. Yeah, you got it, kid. Did you have an influential Engtlish teacher...
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Rings
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
Enjoyed this piece. So many precious things are lost along the way. They never lose the right to spakle. As soon as they are discovered they regain all of the energy and they are always in the last place we look until that sad day when we stop...
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yup
Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2023
Hanging Rock......beautifully captured and expressed with universal engagement. Wonderful use of IP
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