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Posted on Wed, 19 Jan 2011
There are bits that aren't necessary, and bits missing.. Or, just bits I've expected...
Like a pale moonlight. A feeling of vulnerability in the roiling fog..
'dreams prevailed' would be enough where falling asleep is...
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Great work
Posted on Thu, 16 Sep 2010
It might be a cliche.. But the beginning part, with the uneasy sensing of a presence
. It immediately brought to mind Dance of Death, a song by Iron Maiden. I've recently read some of Edgar Allen Poe's short tales, and this one reminds me...
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