TJW

Primary tabs

TypeTitleAuthorRepliesLast updated
Forum topicCalling All You Literary Types styx42 months 3 weeks ago
StoryNew Amsterdam marandina204 months 3 weeks ago
StoryVernal Equinox marandina325 months 1 week ago
StoryThe Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913) marandina145 months 2 weeks ago
Blog entryStory and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point Insertponceyfre...35 months 4 weeks ago
StoryLap Dance TJW86 months 4 days ago
StorySetting Sons marandina456 months 6 days ago
StoryThe Net TJW56 months 2 weeks ago
Storyto pick up time Di_Hard276 months 2 weeks ago
StorySo TJW26 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe War on the Homefront 1 TJW76 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe War on the Homefront End TJW26 months 3 weeks ago
StoryThe War on the Homefront 2 TJW16 months 3 weeks ago
StoryEmily TJW66 months 3 weeks ago
Storyg81 celticman87 months 1 week ago
StorySafety TJW47 months 1 week ago
StoryAmbush TJW97 months 1 week ago
StoryBeauty 2 - End TJW67 months 2 weeks ago
StoryBeauty 1 TJW67 months 2 weeks ago
StoryDon't Name Them. Mentalelf117 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe gift from the elven queen Terrence Oblong48 months 6 days ago
StoryShhh TJW08 months 6 days ago
StoryHomecoming in Three Acts TJW08 months 1 week ago
StoryI write my poems past midnight christiancometa38 months 2 weeks ago
StoryAwareness - End TJW08 months 2 weeks ago

Pages

My stories

Gold cherry
Story of the week

Lap Dance

"TJ, why don'tcha take off early," bossman says, "you look tired as shit." Been clockin' about four to five hours of sleep a night for the past week...
Cherry

The Net

"Shut up, bitch," I say. Don't know when or how but calling a man a "bitch" is commonplace among us, said in jest, mostly, not always. Man says...
1 likes
Cherry

So

Need a light jacket in the morning and heed the weather warning; extra cool early, in the early afternoon warming blue skies later darkened to grey,...
Cherry

The War on the Homefront End

weather, obeys shit. Still leading me, she says I've lost weight, says I look tired. Why don't I take a nap in one of their guest rooms? If I nap, I'...
Cherry

The War on the Homefront 2

"Oh, I been offerin' when you were gone but you lady always told me it ain't mattered." "Don't mind my lady. Drive it now and then if you have the...

Pages

14 of my comments have received 16 Great Feedback votes

2 Votes

Bee, babydoll, I've fought

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016

Bee, babydoll, I've fought three tours, if it'd save you, I'd re-up and fight another three.

 

Jack

Read full comment

Posted in Bee's Journey

1 Vote

Man, who in hell do you think

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

Man, who in hell do you think you are writing like this?  words descriptions emotions convictions all that, listen, you don't write, you describe, illustrate with words.  HOOah, brother.

Jack

Read full comment

Posted in Setting Sons

1 Vote

PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for

Posted on Wed, 07 Apr 2021

PBS broadcast Oedipus Rex for it's Saturday Opera program once. Stravinsky. Drank white wine and enjoyed the show. Also enjoyed this.

Much obliged,

Jack

Read full comment

Posted in The Riot of Spring (Pictures of Pagan Russia 1913)

1 Vote

Knew a native New Yorker. He

Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021

Knew a native New Yorker. He made fun of my accent and I made fun of his too. Only thing I appreciate about big cities is the anonymity. You managed to shine a spotlight on the anonymous and keep it anonymous, damn good style. Much obliged for...

Read full comment

Posted in New Amsterdam

1 Vote

Tell them kids the US Army

Posted on Sat, 06 Mar 2021

Tell them kids the US Army would be proud and honored to have any of them as a brother ( or sister) in arms. The battle they fight is harder than any we fight. A battle against their own bodies. And David's shirt is awesome.

Read full comment

Posted in Don't Name Them.

1 Vote

Lovely to see a comment from

Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2021

Lovely to see a comment from you, insertsmiley

Read full comment

Posted in IP- Things You've Changed Your Mind About 2

1 Vote

What kind of cat?  What kind

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

What kind of cat?  What kind of tree?  Nature and, I think, her poetic son, Uncle Walt, would like this piece and I can hardly think of two better judges to impress.  Much obliged for the read.

 

Jack

Read full comment

Posted in change of address

1 Vote

Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Bronte-esque.  Reads a walk in the woods (or over the moors). 

Read full comment

Posted in wind

1 Vote

Good choice on the P.O.V., 

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

Good choice on the P.O.V.,  makes this read like an accusation.  Strong, direct, YOU, no pussy footing around, style and tempo goes from single-round to semi-auto, to fully automatic.  Much obliged for the read, Ed, tense and direct.

Read full comment

Posted in Big Cat

1 Vote

Hey, celtic, I don't comment

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

Hey, celtic, I don't comment a lot but I read a lot and a lot of what I read you've written though, with your talent, created is the better word. That you see where I am coming from is the beginning of understanding and honest appreciation....

Read full comment

Posted in 18/02/18

Pages