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I have 1122 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1718990 times and 1128 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1379 of my 14,690 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1413 votes

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Angel 70 (burying the living)

The guards were running late, and the taxi ride took forever, but Angel was just glad she’d got the chance to say goodbye to her wee girl. Church...
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Angel 69 (delays)

Angel listened for Adam’s cries and when she couldn’t hear them rushed over to his cot, praying he’d be alright, even though she didn’t believe in...
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Visiting Time

The torso of the hanged man hovered about his bunk, a dark cloth hood over his head, his lower limbs appearing and disappearing into a grey misty...
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trojan horse

When women wait and wail Men fight for virtue and victory Only the brave win Only to lose Their honour in other’s death Tarnished souls Lost in a...
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stone heart 2

Ted dressed and was sitting on the edge of the bed when she came back, which was something. She had a habit of picking the idiot—everybody was...

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1379 of my comments have received 1413 Great Feedback votes

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swans are protected by the

Posted on Mon, 02 May 2022

swans are protected by the queen Ray. So he's got to be canny. 

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 18

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yes, lovely and the kids love

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

yes, lovely and the kids love them too. 

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Posted in butterfly moment

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I guess I'm one of the mouthy

Posted on Mon, 02 May 2022

I guess I'm one of the mouthy drunks, not into jazz, but like this. 

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Posted in Trail Of Thought

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terrific story, but I'd do

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

terrific story, but I'd do away with the lengthy premable at the beinging. 

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Posted in A Theft

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aye, sticky wullies. I threw

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

aye, sticky wullies. I threw one on my niece aged three. She thought it was magic. So diid I. 

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Posted in Sticky Wullie

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revenge always has a logic. I

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

revenge always has a logic. I didn't think I'd start siding with a worm, but I guess that's the kind of worm I am. 

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Posted in A Blindworm’s Revenge

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clappers made me think of

Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2022

clappers made me think of those thngs that clacked together. But god they sound anoying to the power of... 

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Posted in The Clappers

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the ghostly schoolboy coming

Posted on Thu, 28 Apr 2022

the ghostly schoolboy coming out of hte tunnel worked well. 

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Posted in Chickens

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bit of putin and plutocracy. 

Posted on Thu, 28 Apr 2022

bit of putin and plutocracy. 

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Posted in Plutocracy! By Alfred N.Muggins

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I'm sure the Dickensian way

Posted on Tue, 26 Apr 2022

I'm sure the Dickensian way we treat women prisoners, in particular, now, well come to be viewed much like the seven-year sentence handed down here. 

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Posted in The Straw Hat 2

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