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I have 1121 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1707575 times and 1127 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1374 of my 14,673 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1408 votes

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Cherry

Angel 65 (old friends)

Church was off on the sick, the uniformed prison officer standing-in for her, a sour-faced, older woman stuck her head in the door. ‘You’ve visitors...
Cherry

Angel 64 (old friends)

Church, who almost never swore, told the cab driver to ‘Fuck off’ and charge the fare to the prison. A sudden squall of rain soaked them as she...

Mono-sapiens

To learn by rote To learn by heart To be torn apart By ineffable God Apologetics, scripture and theology Observer every Rule Full of ultimate reality...
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the butterfly bush

‘Explain to me how you came to drown?’ His dark eyes twinkled as he peered at her over round glasses that sat squinty on his broad face and a bush of...
Cherry

Angel 63 (going home)

A nurse held the door open for the consultant and Angel smiled up at her. The nurse’s fresh face made the tiled room seem less stuffy, less...

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1374 of my comments have received 1408 Great Feedback votes

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I was told to take our

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

I was told to take our readings as well. Online said it was too busy and put them in later...

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Posted in A Stitch In Time, Saves Eighteen.

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 I think Putin miscaluculated

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

 I think Putin miscaluculated. He'll never admit it, of course. Too many western politicians bought and paid for, including Ukrainians (Gasprom deal). 

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Posted in Russian Propaganda! by Alfred N(azi?) Muggins

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famine does stalk the land,

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

famine does stalk the land, unfortunately not just in fairy tales. 

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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I think I've read this before

Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022

I think I've read this before. if not, something very like it. It's still great and grates. 

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Posted in Don't Look at the Sheikh

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I do not dream of swallows

Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022

I do not dream of swallows either, But somethnng about an airplane crashing. I guess that doesn't make sense. Dreams don't. Your poetry does. 

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Posted in To Dream Of Swallows Is An Ill Omen

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here's hoping, but I'd expect

Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022

here's hoping, but I'd expect letters are old fashioned. You'd get an email (which doesn't make as good a story). 

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Posted in I'm Getting Published!

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ah, just friends? what about

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

ah, just friends? what about the bird-delivery man? Keep the story tail wagging. 

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Posted in Willow's Tail" 26

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a nice twist in the urn of

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

a nice twist in the urn of things. 

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Posted in Wait!

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one never knows how long one

Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022

one never knows how long one has to live, then and now. Interesting that all the action was in Ireland. 

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 28

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my secret is not to visit

Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022

my secret is not to visit anyone with carpets. 

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Posted in Don't You Just Hate It When.......

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