celticman

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I have 1123 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1720585 times and 1129 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1380 of my 14,692 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1415 votes

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Cherry

Angel 37 (rift)

The screws weren’t in a good mood. Angel wasn’t sure what happened but the girls had kicked off because visiting time had been delayed and the time...
Cherry

Angel 36 (every picture)

Angel didn’t need a black cab to take her back to Corton Vale. Flying, she clutched the black-and-white, print-out of the twins, and studied it again...
Cherry

fragments

The smell of blood on snow was strong And so it went on and on Eyes that were drilled and breasts cut off Freezing she could not wait In her knapsack...
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Cherry

Angel 35 (scan)

Angel had hoped her mum might have been at the baby scan. She’d written and told her and then she’d phoned to remind her. But Karen hadn’t turned up...
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Angel 34 (Jonah)

Val made a point of meeting Angel outside her cell door after her meeting with the governor. ‘Some of the girls have been talking. C’mon back to mine...

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1380 of my comments have received 1415 Great Feedback votes

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cherries are plastic, I don't

Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021

cherries are plastic, I don't know if that's organic. But look on the bright side they'll be here longer than us. 

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Posted in ECOCIDE

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Mother Connelly struck down

Posted on Wed, 17 Nov 2021

Mother Connelly struck down by eczema. In one verson of the Christ story, He has bad skin. I wonder if that's what you refer to?

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 13

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our trees, as we remember

Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021

our trees, as we remember them, until they become a memory. 

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Posted in Thoughts Of An Oak Tree's Spirit

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the dead sleep as bones, I do

Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021

the dead sleep as bones, I do that too. It's nice to look and be able to also listen on audio. 

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Posted in When November Comes (with audio)

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Nothing can go wrang that

Posted on Fri, 12 Nov 2021

Nothing can go wrang that will go wrong. Carpe Diem, aye. 

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Posted in Arabian Monkfish (Part Two)

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The[n] sat on his folded-out

Posted on Sat, 13 Nov 2021

The[n] sat on his folded-out bed, 

 the Polish family under him, banging something loud off their ceiling.[banging the ceiling {if he can hear the noise it's loud. No need to add loud]

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Posted in Aloha from Roscarrig - an excerpt from Crowe II, (wip) 2021

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there's lots of action and

Posted on Sat, 13 Nov 2021

there's lots of action and the mytical beings come to life. 

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Posted in Disenchantment 43

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shell shock and PTSD, the

Posted on Fri, 12 Nov 2021

shell shock and PTSD, the same sadness. 

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Posted in Old Soldiers

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my fate is to faollow too. 

Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021

my fate is to faollow too. 

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Posted in Inspired Walk

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I thought I was the only one

Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021

I thought I was the only one with an account: Iamacock. well. I can't be trusted. 

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Posted in A Lorry Load of Sleaze

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