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I have 177 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 399988 times and 278 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1517 of my 5,113 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1558 votes

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You  evoke a feeling of

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

You  evoke a feeling of danger in the first part, both coming from outside (someone deceiving you) and inside, with the striking image of your dreams for the relationship  being like steps sinking into honey. And then comes the warmth and...

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Posted in Hope

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your photo is so beautiful!

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020

your photo is so beautiful! Is that a picture of a blanket your Mother made? It is a lovely idea to give all those close to you something full of your time and love, special for each person.

I like how you repeat words like yarn and row,...

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Posted in "Anna's Blanket"

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Another of your lovely bird

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020

Another of your lovely bird poems! I specially like :

a spirit of young

sparrows

proudly feathered.

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Posted in Here Birdie

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This was a lovely, comforting

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2020

This was a lovely, comforting read, I really like : "It is beauty; it is alive. It stands tall and proud and timeless…and breathes life for us."

Did you go to the ones they have on nature programmes, so huge it takes a dozen steps to walk...

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Posted in Under the Redwoods...

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I missed this poem but am so

Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020

I missed this poem but am so glad I found it just now, it is great, brilliant.

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Posted in Olympian Dreams

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This is so cosy! Made me feel

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020

This is so cosy! Made me feel relaxed reading, Thankyou!

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Posted in Random thoughts...

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Thankyou! Youy cannot know

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020

Thankyou! Youy cannot know how much you have cheered me up :0)

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Posted in wet 6th july

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"They dragged her into

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020

"They dragged her into Rotherhithe"  This ia a great first line, not towed, you make the ship a person

"Her tales became a ramble

No one listened anymore" not only a person but an old lady

so "Dowager...becomes one more...

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Posted in Temeraire

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I like this even more today,

Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020

I like this even more today, it does describe exactly how I feel in our woods! It is WONDERFUL!!!

It is the sort of one where everey time another bit stands out today - "Sap of poems" :0)

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Posted in Wind in Trees by Water

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Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All

Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020

Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All the details about clothes and also the fizzy drinks are great. I would not have thought of them, but they make the reader instantly aware how weird and changed everything is. I do hope this is a long story!

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Posted in "Past or Present" Chapter 3

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