elsie katz

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I have 59 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 38764 times and 32 of my stories have been cherry picked.
97 of my 1,567 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 97 votes

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My stories

Cherry

Wanton Wanting

(Reposted from 3 years ago) My lotus eating fantasies that fire my body but shirk the possibilities of flesh and blood I want not. My ragged boys and...
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Story of the week

Shlamek

Written some years ago by my father Abraham Schaufeld

What Poetry Can Do

Am I a voice in the wilderness? Write back if you feel like me.
Cherry

Mum, when?

A twisted tale of love and politics
Cherry

Anne and Martin

'Anne, where are you off to tonight?' 'I'll not be long, Marie.' ' She's out a lot these days.' She's always busy, always happy.' ​ ​Marie returned...

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97 of my comments have received 97 Great Feedback votes

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Good fun. Your poem makes a

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

Good fun. Your poem makes a humorous point about image and identity. I am not sure why you rated it age 18 ( it does not contain any truly horrible images of war or of the uglier sides of sexual relationships and more people might read it if you...

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Posted in Star Struck

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Jupitermoon this is pretty

Posted on Thu, 13 Nov 2014

Jupitermoon this is pretty real. I often tell myself that it is a waste of time where I live searching for a man my age as all the singletons are wedded to their pint of beer. You illustrate how this relationship can sometimes be unhappy....

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Posted in not quite AA, but only 12 steps to the bar

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Wow! I shall e-mail Dad

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Wow! I shall e-mail Dad prontosmiley

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Posted in Shlamek

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Wish I was there

Posted on Wed, 03 May 2017

Wish I was theresmiley

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Posted in on the Coast path 2/5/17

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very good but very very

Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2017

very good but very very puzzling. Aren't you are a modifying adjective that doesn't know it's place? Yours, 'pretty' vacant....

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Posted in Adverb Angst

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Yes, when the big wheel stops

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2017

Yes, when the big wheel stops still you learn who your friends are...

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Posted in Merry-go-round

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Rhiannon this is a great

Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2017

Rhiannon this is a great piece of loving reality.

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Posted in ‘Where is your home?’

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An enigmatic mix of past and

Posted on Wed, 22 Mar 2017

An enigmatic mix of past and present, If you wrote this with a flesh and blood person in mind I hope they enjoyed it too.Or is it about the need to be alone coupled with the need to be part of society. Either way, it works.

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Posted in Society

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I voted remain too. I did not

Posted on Fri, 24 Mar 2017

I voted remain too. I did not study the matter too deeply but I felt then and I still feel now that is is better for England to remain part of Europe than for us to become an isolated clapped out little country out here on our own.The first...

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Posted in Is this what our politics have become?

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Warm hearted as well as

Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017

Warm hearted as well as handling the matter of fact have-tos. As an early morning person I liked the timing. The lady in the shop is a good cameo and may also work well as the subject for a poem or short story. Your Dad and his porridge and the...

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