elsie katz

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I have 71 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 97840 times and 53 of my stories have been cherry picked.
117 of my 1,908 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 115 votes

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A Cancelled Passport

'You're wearing a suit and tie!' Mr Peter Francis Lockyer. Place of birth Exeter. Occupation student - scored out - new occupation travel broker. 'I...
Cherry

Tom and Old Willie

Elsie meets her daughter for Bath-time fun. Who are the guys?

Dave Swakeley is Dying

Dave Swakeley Of the London Hillingdon Estate Drank lager Grew Bitter. Bright lad Full of light and life Light feet on the field of football Dave...
Cherry

Fable

Sometimes the slow road is the best way to travel
Cherry

Waters

Mutual sticky exchange of lovejuices. Amniotic release of newborn flooding the sheets. A small face fastens wisely onto one teat and the the next...

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117 of my comments have received 115 Great Feedback votes

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Short and pretty, I like it.

Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2017

Short and pretty, I like it.

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Posted in Starry Dreamers

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If I am ever in Dundalk I

Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2016

If I am ever in Dundalk I guarantee you, Sean I shall visit the Train Station. At least twice. Mind you this year my priority is the Isle of Man. I mean it..Man. Keep going I like it. Happy New Year...

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Posted in CC 88: My Train Station is Better than Yours

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These windows are beautiful.

Posted on Sat, 17 Dec 2016

These windows are beautiful.

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Posted in Window 17) A king riding a donkey

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It's different and I can

Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2016

It's different and I can understand what you are saying. Why did you choose this colour for the man?

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Posted in subjected/ subjugated

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I like this a lot. 'I

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

I like this a lot. 'I scribble on,' the paper being the perfect companion. The last verse with its sharp ending is quite deep 'when I wasn't looking it stopped to rain.' and that's when the writer grows up ...

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Posted in Pure Inspiration

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Freedom! Yes, that's what we

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016

Freedom! Yes, that's what we need. Also love peace and equality. I like your poem....

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Posted in Colour Blind

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Great description Rhiannon.

Posted on Wed, 30 Nov 2016

Great description Rhiannon. Scratchy is a good word.smiley

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Posted in Frost and Sun

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As always, good writing which

Posted on Fri, 25 Nov 2016

As always, good writing which illustrates the present, moves the story on efficiently and ends on the 'what next' cliffhanger. Like the car window writing. Give us the next episode please, I know CM and i are impatiently waiting.

BTW Sean...

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Posted in CC 73: Answers from the Hill

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'You are sorry as always'. I

Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015

'You are sorry as always'. I left 2 relationships when the good times ran out, both times in the early stages of pregnancy. I also volunteered ar the Stirling refuge while expecting my elder daughter. Yes, the 'sorry' can be heartfelt. But it's...

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Posted in Happy families

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Yes! I want to be there.

Posted on Fri, 11 Nov 2016

Yes! I want to be there.

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Posted in Bright November Late Afternoon

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