Gothicman

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I have 85 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 32107 times and 43 of my stories have been cherry picked.
66 of my 284 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 70 votes

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Hammock Dreams Running Amok!

Class Insecta + 30 ° c influenced! Pic: no ©
Cherry

Last Will And Testament

Waiting deep inside; unique to each. My thoughts, the last moments in the cellar of our empty old Victorian house before it was demolished 1961. Pic: my own

Creative Motivation

from Birth, Life, and Death - Pic: my own
Cherry

Sublimely Spoken

Message heard, the challenge enjoyed, occasionally comprehended In defence of the cryptic poet - pic, no ©
Cherry

Ascending With Swans

a heartlifting experience - pic no ©

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66 of my comments have received 70 Great Feedback votes

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One of your best Rachel, your

Posted on Sat, 26 Jun 2021

One of your best Rachel, your creative skill admired and enjoyed, a real treat to read through.
Trevor

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Posted in Swan

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A beautiful pastoral poem,

Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021

A beautiful pastoral poem, Jenny; a resignation to the inevitable, to how things always will be, a view of life we should all try, and wish to achieve, one I whole-heartedly agree with. Lovely versed poetry, reassuring, about regeneration,...

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Posted in Resting Place

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A wise walrus Luigi, we've

Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020

A wise walrus Luigi, we've got to get our fingers out now, and reverse this pollution of the seas and beaches. Superb, uncompromised rhyme, and told in your concise and relevant style. You're on form, and enjoyed the read, even if a sad...

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Posted in As the Walrus Said

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A sometimes poignant, but

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020

A sometimes poignant, but mostly entertaining, humorous read, had me chuckling right through it. I kept on having to readjust the picture that was forming in my mind as the next sentence changed the whole premise. Full of small anecdotes that...

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Posted in the old geezer

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What fabulous music, and what

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

What fabulous music, and what skill and authentic honesty to be able to express those nightmarish feelings and visualisations in a way that enables the listener to in some way relive the mental hell they evoked! Old Russian music at its best....

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Posted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain

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Wonderful piece of versed

Posted on Wed, 07 Jul 2021

Wonderful piece of versed contemplation, Jenny, capturing the moment, and too, the memories the setting opportunely awoke when relaxed attention allowed them to slip into consciousness. A empathic poet's inspiration-seeking, freedom leap and...

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Posted in Daydreamer

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A fine poem with an important

Posted on Fri, 09 Jul 2021

A fine poem with an important moral message too, expertly and beautifully handled, great work Rachel. Thanks once more for an intriguing and rewarding read.
Trevor

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Posted in Here is the sun

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Brilliant, in both

Posted on Fri, 02 Jul 2021

Brilliant, in both composition and performance! A fascinating glimpse into your versitality as an entertainer too; just about recognize the copacabana melody line, don't know how you managed to keep it all together in that constant accentuated...

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Posted in Builder's Plaster

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Beautiful concise poem with

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

Beautiful concise poem with incidental rhyme, describing this periodic, regulated time so precisely. Now I'm retired, the days seem to go rapidly by in this fashion, although here, an enormous sun-lit moon refuses to allow the 'all is dark' phase...

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Posted in From dawn ’til …

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I've always wondered Jenny,

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

I've always wondered Jenny, if a landscape, its slow natural development over a long history, the long struggle of its locally-based people in achieving/forming what it's become today, is beyond the atmospheric feel, appreciation even, of later...

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Posted in Timeless Wonder

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