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A wise walrus Luigi, we've
Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020
A wise walrus Luigi, we've got to get our fingers out now, and reverse this pollution of the seas and beaches. Superb, uncompromised rhyme, and told in your concise and relevant style. You're on form, and enjoyed the read, even if a sad...
A sometimes poignant, but mostly entertaining, humorous read, had me chuckling right through it. I kept on having to readjust the picture that was forming in my mind as the next sentence changed the whole premise. Full of small anecdotes that...
A superb poem, Rachel, from an insightful dream I read. Feels so tenderly real and raw, but can be interpreted as a hope giving prophecy too. Wishing you well with it all.
A poem of cautious anticipation, Jenny, as Winter approaches again, from an aging perspective, using sadly remembered comparisons when managing it all was so much easier? Briefly written, but held together by a nostalgic red thread. Let's hope...
Well, it was intermittent, but never-ending, unfortunately. A cold, calm approach was necessary to remain efficient, but the emotional effects were felt of course at the strangest of times, luckily, I too, had a debriefing therapist when needed....
I like the way you accentuate these specialised bird's function, or role, in the nurturing chain of ever-reproducing woodland, Rachel. Seed dispersal being an important part of ecological renewal and the need to be spread further in changing...
Strange time-lag seeing light arriving from distant stars, but the moon, so near, and seemingly larger these days? Lovely poem, full of movement and light. One of my old special military skills back in the days was Night Navigation (without any ...
Such great poetry, Rachel,
and as always a pleasure to carefully read through. I knew of the BM phenomena, having once spent the night on a live mattress in a B & B in Hull! No, joking apart, I like the way you apply it's action over to...
The magic and purity of childhood innocence and face-value wonder soon evaporate as another rules-based reality creeps in and far too quickly takes over. This is why I have such high regard for vulnerable people, who still, perhaps foolishly,...
A wise walrus Luigi, we've
Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020
A wise walrus Luigi, we've got to get our fingers out now, and reverse this pollution of the seas and beaches. Superb, uncompromised rhyme, and told in your concise and relevant style. You're on form, and enjoyed the read, even if a sad...
Read full commentPosted in As the Walrus Said
A sometimes poignant, but
Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020
A sometimes poignant, but mostly entertaining, humorous read, had me chuckling right through it. I kept on having to readjust the picture that was forming in my mind as the next sentence changed the whole premise. Full of small anecdotes that...
Read full commentPosted in the old geezer
A superb poem, Rachel, from
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020
A superb poem, Rachel, from an insightful dream I read. Feels so tenderly real and raw, but can be interpreted as a hope giving prophecy too. Wishing you well with it all.
Trevor x
Read full commentPosted in November
A poem of cautious
Posted on Wed, 16 Sep 2020
A poem of cautious anticipation, Jenny, as Winter approaches again, from an aging perspective, using sadly remembered comparisons when managing it all was so much easier? Briefly written, but held together by a nostalgic red thread. Let's hope...
Read full commentPosted in In Quiet Moments
Well, it was intermittent,
Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020
Well, it was intermittent, but never-ending, unfortunately. A cold, calm approach was necessary to remain efficient, but the emotional effects were felt of course at the strangest of times, luckily, I too, had a debriefing therapist when needed....
Read full commentPosted in By One's Own Hand
I like the way you accentuate
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2020
I like the way you accentuate these specialised bird's function, or role, in the nurturing chain of ever-reproducing woodland, Rachel. Seed dispersal being an important part of ecological renewal and the need to be spread further in changing...
Read full commentPosted in Spotted Nutcrackers
Strange time-lag seeing light
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2020
Strange time-lag seeing light arriving from distant stars, but the moon, so near, and seemingly larger these days? Lovely poem, full of movement and light. One of my old special military skills back in the days was Night Navigation (without any ...
Read full commentPosted in Preparation Moon Cycle
Such great poetry, Rachel,
Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2020
Such great poetry, Rachel,
Read full commentand as always a pleasure to carefully read through. I knew of the BM phenomena, having once spent the night on a live mattress in a B & B in Hull! No, joking apart, I like the way you apply it's action over to...
Posted in Not Brownian Motion
The magic and purity of
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020
The magic and purity of childhood innocence and face-value wonder soon evaporate as another rules-based reality creeps in and far too quickly takes over. This is why I have such high regard for vulnerable people, who still, perhaps foolishly,...
Read full commentPosted in "Limited Vision"
Beautiful poem, Jenny. Many
Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020
Beautiful poem, Jenny. Many will recognise the times, and lament their passing.
Read full commentRegards, Trevor
Posted in Bygone Times
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