Gothicman

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My stories have been read 14217 times and 27 of my stories have been cherry picked.
49 of my 219 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 51 votes

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The Withdrawn Ego

Recalcitrant as ever!

Once Upon A Time

at a favourite lake; scene shot yesterday; at high altitude, wedged deep against a high rock fault, it offers innermost nostalgic recuperation for the hardy distance walker

MD's Fall From Grace

Ultimate denigration

On An Undercover Assignment

the cheerful C-19 veteran's on a second tour of duty to fight the Autumn spike! - pic: no ©
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A Premeditated Risk

at entry-level Hollywood

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49 of my comments have received 51 Great Feedback votes

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A wise walrus Luigi, we've

Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020

A wise walrus Luigi, we've got to get our fingers out now, and reverse this pollution of the seas and beaches. Superb, uncompromised rhyme, and told in your concise and relevant style. You're on form, and enjoyed the read, even if a sad...

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Posted in As the Walrus Said

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A sometimes poignant, but

Posted on Sun, 17 May 2020

A sometimes poignant, but mostly entertaining, humorous read, had me chuckling right through it. I kept on having to readjust the picture that was forming in my mind as the next sentence changed the whole premise. Full of small anecdotes that...

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Posted in the old geezer

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A superb poem, Rachel, from

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2020

A superb poem, Rachel, from an insightful dream I read. Feels so tenderly real and raw, but  can be interpreted as a hope giving prophecy too. Wishing you well with it all.

Trevor x

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Posted in November

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A poem of cautious

Posted on Wed, 16 Sep 2020

A poem of cautious anticipation, Jenny, as Winter approaches again, from an aging perspective, using sadly remembered comparisons when managing it all was so much easier? Briefly written, but held together by a nostalgic red thread. Let's hope...

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Posted in In Quiet Moments

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Well, it was intermittent,

Posted on Sat, 23 May 2020

Well, it was intermittent, but never-ending, unfortunately. A cold, calm approach was necessary to remain efficient, but the emotional effects were felt of course at the strangest of times, luckily, I too, had a debriefing therapist when needed....

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Posted in By One's Own Hand

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I like the way you accentuate

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2020

I like the way you accentuate these specialised bird's function, or role, in the nurturing chain of ever-reproducing woodland, Rachel. Seed dispersal being an important part of ecological renewal and the need to be spread further in changing...

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Posted in Spotted Nutcrackers

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Strange time-lag seeing light

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2020

Strange time-lag seeing light arriving from distant stars, but the moon, so near, and seemingly larger these days? Lovely poem, full of movement and light. One of my old special military skills back in the days was Night Navigation (without any ...

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Posted in Preparation Moon Cycle

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Such great poetry, Rachel,

Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2020

Such great poetry, Rachel,
and as always a pleasure to carefully read through. I knew of the BM phenomena, having once spent the night on a live mattress in a B & B in Hull! No, joking apart, I like the way you apply it's action over to...

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Posted in Not Brownian Motion

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The magic and purity of

Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020

The magic and purity of childhood innocence and face-value wonder soon evaporate as another rules-based reality creeps in and far too quickly takes over. This is why I have such high regard for vulnerable people, who still, perhaps foolishly,...

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Posted in "Limited Vision"

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Beautiful poem, Jenny. Many

Posted on Mon, 07 Sep 2020

Beautiful poem, Jenny. Many will recognise the times, and lament their passing.
Regards, Trevor

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Posted in Bygone Times

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