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I have 1302 stories published in 31 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 691648 times and 316 of my stories have been cherry picked.
69 of my 1,202 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 71 votes

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jerry ryan

 

My stories

Babe Out of the Woods

A mere 20 years after Arthur Moore mistakenly heard the voice of God (or did he?), 1% of the Ameican descendants of Adam and Eve heard the first news...

Sacred Snerkle?

I get it. We like to think that the voice of God speaks perfect English and sounds like Morgan Freeman or James Earl Jones or Orson Welles or all...

Snerk Factory

Five minutes before the end of a successful working day (Is there a more blissful moment?) I was sitting in my cubicle gathering wool while...

The Discovery of Ignorance

Even though we keep them caged, we are moved by their self-regard and lack of inhibition. Look into the eyes of a great ape and you will see no signs...

The First Murder

Disobedience Murder Crime Punishment Oh Yeah. Cain was a farmer. Abel was a shepherd. Cain was a hunter gatherer and wanderer. Cain was a farmer and...

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69 of my comments have received 71 Great Feedback votes

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sweet

Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022

good job all the way

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Posted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part Three.

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Yup

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

Still egaged and with ya.

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Posted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part Two.

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great start

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

I'm aboard once again.

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Posted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part One.

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Yeah

Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022

Read every word of every segment and enjoyed all of it all the time. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Perhaps you will read my latest post called "Norge". I completed it this morning.

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Posted in The .......zzz ZZZ Part Four.

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Still with ya

Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022

Time warps are real. Keep goin'.

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Posted in The.......Part Three

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Keep writing

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022

Writing in its own way is a form of love and healing

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Posted in Buried Treasure

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Totally with you

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

Here's an example of active versus passive.

The batter hit the ball. (active)

The ball was hit by the batter (passive)

In the first example the subject of the sentence (batter) is doing something (hitting the ball)

In...

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Still with ya

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

love the set up.

Four days quickly passed.

careful not carful

do as you please

And I thnk the first sentence would be better if you used active voice rather than passive voice and got rid of that "importantly" adverb...

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Hey Maxine

Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022

What a start. Engaging, coherent. Enjoyed reading it. I'd give it a cherry even though we have to await the resoultion but the set up is great. 

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Congrats

Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022

On capturing an ethereal shimmer; the essence of poetry

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Posted in In Lucid Dreams

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