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A mere 20 years after Arthur Moore mistakenly heard the voice of God (or did he?), 1% of the Ameican descendants of Adam and Eve heard the first news...
Even though we keep them caged, we are moved by their self-regard and lack of inhibition. Look into the eyes of a great ape and you will see no signs...
Disobedience Murder Crime Punishment Oh Yeah. Cain was a farmer. Abel was a shepherd. Cain was a hunter gatherer and wanderer. Cain was a farmer and...
Read every word of every segment and enjoyed all of it all the time. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Perhaps you will read my latest post called "Norge". I completed it this morning.
sweet
Posted on Sun, 30 Oct 2022
good job all the way
Read full commentPosted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part Three.
Yup
Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022
Still egaged and with ya.
Read full commentPosted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part Two.
great start
Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2022
I'm aboard once again.
Read full commentPosted in I Am a Celebrity, Get Me Out of Here. Part One.
Yeah
Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022
Read every word of every segment and enjoyed all of it all the time. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Perhaps you will read my latest post called "Norge". I completed it this morning.
Read full commentPosted in The .......zzz ZZZ Part Four.
Still with ya
Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022
Time warps are real. Keep goin'.
Read full commentPosted in The.......Part Three
Keep writing
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Writing in its own way is a form of love and healing
Read full commentPosted in Buried Treasure
Totally with you
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
Here's an example of active versus passive.
The batter hit the ball. (active)
The ball was hit by the batter (passive)
In the first example the subject of the sentence (batter) is doing something (hitting the ball)
In...
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Still with ya
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
love the set up.
Four days quickly passed.
careful not carful
do as you please
And I thnk the first sentence would be better if you used active voice rather than passive voice and got rid of that "importantly" adverb...
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Hey Maxine
Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022
What a start. Engaging, coherent. Enjoyed reading it. I'd give it a cherry even though we have to await the resoultion but the set up is great.
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Congrats
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
On capturing an ethereal shimmer; the essence of poetry
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
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