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I have 1334 stories published in 31 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 724534 times and 317 of my stories have been cherry picked.
69 of my 1,220 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 71 votes

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A Coach and a Librarian Walk Into A Bar

A coach and a librarian walked into a bar. The bar was called Pinkies. Every other week, Pinkies offered a two fer on Martha Stewart wines. The coach...

Insane Asylum Cut Again

What came first, the cowlick or the colic? A cowlick is a section of hair that stands straight up or grows at an angle against the natural direction...

The Reditrix Responds

The next day , Damien received this personal message. Ah, Damien, you've stumbled into my domain like a naive fly drawn to the shimmering threads of...

Damien Grant Explains Baseball

Baseball is a game where one member from team A tries to hit a ball with a stick and then run around in a square while team B tries to stop him from...

Fact Checking Asshole

Now that we're here, let's talk about a twenty first century creature who has emerged from the cellular stream and prowls amongst us in various...

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69 of my comments have received 71 Great Feedback votes

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clarity

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

is a requirement for great writing. Your clarity is great in this piece. Not all clarity is engaging but this piece engages with the power of coherence and clarity. Thank you for this.

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Posted in Nanny part 1

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Lovely rembrance

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2022

As a committed Scrabble player, I appreciate every detail of this story. I usually play against the computer so there's never gonna be a mystery zee as there was in this great story.

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Posted in Where's the Z?

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hey Drew

Posted on Sat, 20 Aug 2022

We call it soccer over here and it's growing in popularity. The sterotype of soccer fans unfortunately is a bunch of rowdy drunks beating the shit out of each other. We are big fans of Ted Lasso over here for whatever that's worth. Fandom is a...

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Posted in King of Contradiction

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Great question

Posted on Fri, 05 Aug 2022

Gracefully asked.

I was thinking about co-ordination and confidence. Writing is about the co-ordination of putting letters together that form thoughts and thought together that form ideas and ideas together that  express a momentary...

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Posted in Why do you write?

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some say we live as long as the last person who remembers us

Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022

is still alive. Your writing and growing reputation assures that you will live on even after you pass. I'm very glad that you're alive and that we have crossed paths during this mortal coil amidst the fog and the flowers.

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Posted in Forget-Me-Not

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Sooner

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022

is better than later. Thanks for reading David. Some people don't care for the razzamatazz that Luhrman brings to his direction. I found it appropriate in telling the tale of Elvis. It's a big movie. The day before we saw Black Phone....that's a...

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Posted in On Elvis

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well done Richard

Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2022

inspirational

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Posted in I Walk Among Recordings

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Momentary Inspiration (thank you)

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

https://www.abctales.com/story/ice-rivers/vivian-inspired-jane#new

Thanks Jane for the inspiration

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Posted in If I can just get through the day

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thanks for reading David

Posted on Sat, 28 May 2022

somehow, we survived. Not so sure about the reduction in people visiting the states. There's always people willing to run with the bulls. Imagin how much crdeit for balls you can get back home when you return from a trip to Detroit or St. Louis...

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Posted in Downton Distraction

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Thank you David

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

I'm sorry that I had to write it.

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Posted in Memory and Mourning

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