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I have 38 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 28653 times and 50 of my stories have been cherry picked.
42 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 42 votes

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Mark Say

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Cherry

The Straw Man (part 2/2)

A young boy is distressed by what his father does to a scarecrow
Gold cherry

The Straw Man (part 1/2)

A young boy is distressed by what his father does to a scarecrow
Cherry

Indian Church

A hunted man finds an unexpected source of sanctuary deep in the forest
Cherry

Colour Between the Folds

All I wanted to do was stare at white, until I encountered the curtain, the projector and the mimes
Gold cherry

Meeting Tara

A middle aged man hears from a woman claiming to be his daughter.

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42 of my comments have received 42 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

Conveys so many old yearnings and frustrations in one brief incident. Well done Torscot.

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Posted in My little Indian in Summer (I.P.)

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Well done SG

Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014

Very good. I really like the way you conveyed all the disappointments and little triumphs in a career with such economy. The short sentences work very well in the context and those scraps of detail do a great job of conveying the changes of...

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Posted in The End of the Pier

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Well done John. I found this

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2014

Well done John. I found this a very vivid in evoking the mood as much as describing the place, and really impressed by that hint of something sour dropped in at the end. If anything, I thought you could have made a touch more of that, but still...

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Posted in That Field

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Nice story. I like the way it

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Nice story. I like the way it builds the sense of anticipation which is then quickly deflated. I bet most of us have gone through something similar at some time.

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Posted in Dormity Gardens

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Aaaah! Apostrophes with a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2013

Aaaah! Apostrophes with a plural S! You also want to watch out for the its' when it should be it's.

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Posted in Sehnsuct

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