8 of my comments have received 8 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
I think you've pretty much just described what life should be about. I especially like the first two stanzas. It's true, I don't think there's anything beautiful in fakery either. I always think you look best exactly as you are ;-)
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Posted in Home sweet home
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
The wealth of imagery and the use of language in this poem is mesmerising. Flowed comfortably, though touching upon a somewhat uncomfortable and disturbing subject for some...
I'm happy I discovered this gem. Great work....Read full comment
Posted in Tattoo man
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
i think this one's my favourite of the recent poems you've posted. A mysterious, dark aura to a poem that otherwise glows with beautiful imagery and stunning use of language. Reading this, I felt completely connected to every word and every line...Read full comment
Posted in "At the Going Down of the Sun"
The moon it rose – the hour
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
The moon it rose – the hour was late
for love, of time, no heed does take,
and demons danced upon the lake
as they bade farewell to Camelot.
Just beautiful. That was my favourita stanza. Usually I find short...Read full comment
Posted in Camelot
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2015
"So much has changed since our fathers farmed
this land...when the lapwing reigned, supreme...
where dozens and dozens of dead badgers
desecrate the side of the road, to just one
squashed hedgehog...where the fox is more...
Posted in A Blot on the Landscape