Noo

Primary tabs

I have 127 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 83125 times and 273 of my stories have been cherry picked.
24 of my 753 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 26 votes

Noo's picture

 

My stories

Cherry

QWERTYUIOP

Through the office window, Mr. Jones looks out at the rain. It’s dribbling down the glass, with no enthusiasm or power. Thin, grey streaks only, its...
Gold cherry

Moon

“You want love. You don’t know what it means. All you know is that you need someone to hold and to hold you.” – Pleasure Club. * Snow moon A moon,...
2 likes
Gold cherry

Captive Audience

This story is mainly – well, generally - maybe a little bit - ok you got me, hardly at all - based on the truth.
Gold cherry

Nets

High tide In the slow creep that evening makes towards true dark, Pierre sits on the harbour wall. His boat bobs in front of him and it’s as ready to...
Gold cherry

Kitsune

I first saw the fox in the garden around the same time I discovered the holloway. The fox slunk across the patchy lawn in my back garden; hesitant,...

Pages

24 of my comments have received 26 Great Feedback votes

2 Votes

So lovely, Tina.  The

Posted on Tue, 25 Aug 2015

So lovely, Tina.  The memories of our kids are so dear and so often when you're in the middle of being with them, it's hard to see that.  Think you've captured this in your poem. :)

Read full comment

Posted in On my Daughter Learning to Ride

2 Votes

A lovely title, Stephen and

Posted on Wed, 21 Jan 2015

A lovely title, Stephen and the whole piece seems quite experimental in a good way.  I wonder in the middle section whether there should be a slight re-edit so there's more show and less tell, but I might not be right about that.  The last line...

Read full comment

Posted in Made you into a River

1 Vote

I like the busy activity in

Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2017

I like the busy activity in this. It's very creative:)

Read full comment

Posted in Written Where?

1 Vote

Like the ambiguity of the

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2017

Like the ambiguity of the title - suitable for both father and son. It's serious and sad without being maudlin and this is hard to pull off. One, possible thought - does it need the last line? Doesn't everything before this make it clear without...

Read full comment

Posted in The Man on the Other End of the Phone

1 Vote

Merci CM.  Hard work writing

Posted on Fri, 02 Dec 2016

Merci CM.  Hard work writing something longer and trying to keep all threads going through.  I take my virtual hat off to you that you managed it in your novel :)

Read full comment

Posted in Darkness settles - Delarosa, 14th September, 1975

1 Vote

Like the sheer conviction of

Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2016

Like the sheer conviction of the world you create here.  It's completely believable because you create it to be so.  Otherworldy and totally recognisable. Works well in its differentness. :)

Read full comment

Posted in COSMIC ARBORETUM

1 Vote

Like the rhythm and tongue in

Posted on Fri, 04 Mar 2016

Like the rhythm and tongue in cheekedness. Would make a good performance piece. :)

Read full comment

Posted in the enigma of man

1 Vote

Really works this, Rhiannon.

Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2016

Really works this, Rhiannon. I like the flow and movement, leading to the ocean motion. :)

Read full comment

Posted in Flowing … (Poetry Monthly)

1 Vote

Kind of despairing and

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2016

Kind of despairing and affectionate at the same time.  Like life is really :)

Read full comment

Posted in Don't talk back

1 Vote

This made me giggle. I like

Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2015

This made me giggle. I like that Alon is called Alon - think it suits his elm tree, heroin mashup. :)

Read full comment

Posted in 'The first date' a chapter from my new novel 'And?'

Pages