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I have 157 stories published in 9 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 142125 times and 330 of my stories have been cherry picked.
33 of my 933 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 35 votes

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Cherry

Knock Knock - part 2

A story about plumbing in three parts.
Cherry

Knock Knock - part 1

A story about plumbing in three parts.
Cherry

Classification - part 3

A story in three parts.
Gold cherry

Classification - part 2

A story in three parts.
Cherry
Story of the week

Classification - part 1

A story in three parts.

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33 of my comments have received 35 Great Feedback votes

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Great balance between long

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

Great balance between long and short sentences.  You have a real skill of getting the sound and shape of writing right. :)

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Posted in Castle Pillock 8

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Wrote the below in reply to

Posted on Sun, 20 Sep 2015

Wrote the below in reply to your comment on my story, so apologies if you've already seen and here it is if you didn't:

I'd logged in to comment on your last piece about the hunter-ditherer, but can't find it.  The term has been one Philip...

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Posted in Lost Tribes Re-edit

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Very well written and very

Posted on Wed, 09 Sep 2015

Very well written and very sincere writing.  You felt the hopelessness and the love and the absolute need to protect so strongly.  Uncomfortable and ambiguous. :)

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Posted in The Theory of Demons (IP)

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Beautiful and haunting. Think

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2015

Beautiful and haunting. Think passed should be past? :)

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Posted in The Cleaners

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This is so sumptuous and rich

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2015

This is so sumptuous and rich, Tina.  But I like too, how the end is wispy. :)

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Posted in Lucy in the Sky...

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This really captures that

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015

This really captures that business of spring, with moments of stillness and anticipation.  It was lovely to read.  Really like the picture of the boxing hares too - would love those in my garden! :)

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Posted in Spring Springs

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Your poems are very spare and

Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015

Your poems are very spare and tender.  Your use of the past tense gives things a wistful air :)

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Posted in For S., 8 Poems (3-4)

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I really like the change in

Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015

I really like the change in mood of this throughout.  It doesn't stay still, but in a good way. :)

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Posted in The Hill in the Pale

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