WolfdDennis

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I have 10 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1497 times 2 of my 16 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes

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Dennis Wolf

Disillusioned, depressed... If I write I suffer, if I don't write I suffer more.

In all honesty, I've got no idea why I bother posting stuff online anymore..

Thought it'd help me improve my nonexistent skills.. But all this time spent on several sites, and I'm still stuck on this infernal substandard junk.

Sorry for wasting your time.

My stories

Chapter 10 -- Insidiae Divinae

The blond figure gestured all others to leave. I've.. To stay with him.. The only comprehensible thought came in segments as once more that piercing...
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Chapter 9 -- Exeunt Omnes

The cowards! After all that, they run away! Fury bellowed time and time again in Ash's mind, swiftly followed by a colorful repertoire of oaths,...
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Chapter 7 -- Proditiones

Why did you go home anyway, it's unusual for you to visit before a job.. I've a feeling this mission is my last.. Once more, his thoughts cleared up...

Chapter 6-- Diu oblitus

Probably gonna rewrite soon.

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Posted on Wed, 19 Jan 2011

There are bits that aren't necessary, and bits missing.. Or, just bits I've expected...

Like a pale moonlight. A feeling of vulnerability in the roiling fog..

 

'dreams prevailed' would be enough where falling asleep is...

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Great work

Posted on Thu, 16 Sep 2010

It might be a cliche.. But the beginning part, with the uneasy sensing of a presence

. It immediately brought to mind Dance of Death, a song by Iron Maiden.  I've recently read some of Edgar Allen Poe's short tales, and this one reminds me...

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