celticman

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I have 1131 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1765494 times and 1140 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1350 of my 14,451 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1383 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Love Story 16

We’d arranged to meet by the coal cellar, when it was dark. I’d already checked. The lights in Mrs Connolly’s house were out. Apart from the one in...
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Love Story 15

Ali came to my room after dinner. It was too cold to do anything. So we rolled about my bed, cuddling and kissing. She moaned a few times. Flashed...
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Love Story 14

Mum made us both a pot of tea and put out a plate of Digestive. We sat at the table, knee to knee. She had her fags. I’d my biscuits to dunk in my...
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Love Story 13

Da came through for his dinner. He glanced at us talking and laughing, grunted something, as he drowned the fish in salt and vinegar. Picked up his...
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Love Story 12

Mum had a cup of tea on the go and the chip pan on to make Da’s tea. Animal fat and incinerated starch creating a sticky vapour that clung to every...
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1350 of my comments have received 1383 Great Feedback votes

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this is lovely. 

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

this is lovely. 

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Posted in In This Garden

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weirdly enough...I enjoyed

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

weirdly enough...I enjoyed this. 

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Posted in Getting Older Sucks...

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too many showers, but thaks

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024

too many showers, but thaks for the vision of better things. 

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Posted in Wild Side Of April

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The media cover-up and stitch

Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024

The media cover-up and stitch up of the victims was, as we expected, trying to contain the story and dehumanise the victims. Lessons from the mining strike. 

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Posted in Hillsborough

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made me think of Davie Bowie

Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024

made me think of Davie Bowie (Ziggy) for some reason. 

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Posted in Where is Everybody?

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sometimes we need the wrong

Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2024

sometimes we need the wrong kind of glasses to see. Nicely done. There's hope out there if you look. 

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Posted in Eclipse

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wow, insert, the title felt

Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024

wow, insert, the title felt vaguely familiar. Then I realised I wrote it!

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Posted in Windfall.

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wonderful twist at the end.

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

wonderful twist at the end. Makes all that grief even more believeable. 

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Posted in Dad's poet society

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in other words, we don't know

Posted on Wed, 03 Apr 2024

in other words, we don't know what we're talking about. 

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Posted in Black Hole

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there is something primal in

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024

there is something primal in drums and song. 

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Posted in Passion Of The Drums

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