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Di, from experience with one

Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018

Di, from experience with one of my sons, a diagnosis is really important - and it can take ages to arrange unless you get it done privately which can cost a fortune. A diagnosis of dyspraxia meant my son was given extra time in GCSEs (whatever...

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Posted in A Martian in the Closet

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Hahahaha - thanks for the

Posted on Wed, 11 Jul 2018

Hahahaha - thanks for the translation London/parson - I know it's petty but Tony was very strict about that so I guess we should be too

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Posted in The meeting - good friends

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No sense in talking about the

Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018

No sense in talking about the cracks.
Blokes don’t need help,
just a good night’s sleep
a shower
a shit
a shave and
a shag
my father said
my mates said
my brother said

that makes me so...

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Posted in The Iceberg

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I really like the meticulous

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017

I really like the meticulous detail in this piece - the timetable of the woman's day works well as a frame for the narrative, and the small events come across as very authentic, as does the relationship between the couple.

Suggestions: In...

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Posted in May you live all the days of your life

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Hi - what a fascinating peice

Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014

Hi - what a fascinating peice this is! it was really interesting the way you compared the different geographical prejudices. My only criticisim is that we're kind of left hanging .... there's so little about when you're actually there. I was...

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Posted in 7 days in Tehran

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Hello fining - welcome to ABC

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Hello fining - welcome to ABC. This has a nice flow to it, but since you've specifically asked, I do have a couple of observations:

 

firstly, it might have been better to post the prologue and chapter one seperately - easier for...

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Posted in August Shadow (working title): Prologue

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Wonderful to see another part

Posted on Sat, 18 May 2024

Wonderful to see another part of this, and I loved Hug a Lass last night, thank you so much for reading it!

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 14

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Excellent dialogue (which I'm

Posted on Fri, 17 May 2024

Excellent dialogue (which I'm sure I've said before) - thank you!

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Posted in Standing in the Shadows of Love (Dead Reckoning series - Part 9)

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Don't they make the most

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

Don't they make the most beautiful noise? Thank you for reminding me Jenny, and congratulations on the the cherries

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Posted in Waterfall

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oh no - range anxiety! But it

Posted on Mon, 13 May 2024

oh no - range anxiety! But it sounds like a beautiful detour - thank you for sharing!

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Posted in Capricious Satnav

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