The fight with Mom hadn't lasted long. We were both screaming, trying to be louder than each other. Next thing I knew I was outside, runnign at a dead sprint, icy cold rain striking my face, soaking my clothes. I entered the forest behind my house, somethign I had never done, and something my parents forbid me to do. I ran through the trees until I couldn't see the house behind me, and continued forward, walking brethlessly. It gradually got darker, and I got tired. After walking for what seemed to be at least an hour, I sat on a large rock. Before long, I stood, and began walking again.
The rain didn't stop, and neither did my feet. I didn't really know where I was going, and why I kept going either. Eventually I got to the end of the forest. The place I saw was completely unknown to me. Little houses were placed all over, their height being only a foot taller than me. I started walking, curling my way through the village, but saw no one. As the rain continued, the village's dirt floor turned to mud, making it harder to walk as I went on. By now, it was the middle of the night. Some of the houses had light coming through the windows, but most were dark.
I continued on, and the village seemed to be asleep, as was expected for the time being what it was. I was getting tired, not focusing well to my suroundings.
"What are you doing?!?" I whired around to face the voice's source.
"Over here!" It came out again. I turned a little to my left, and saw, about five houses away, a lit up house with the door open. In the doorway stood a short figure.

Comments
Midnight_Dreams | February 22, 2009 - 14:08
Good first chapter!
Make sure you spellcheck your work first though - I spotted a few typos that you'll need to correct.
Other than that, you've done a great job and I'm looking forward to reading what happens next :)
Midnight_Dreams
Yazmin | February 23, 2009 - 19:59
This is a very good first chapter, especially since you left it on a cliff-hanger, I cant wait to read the second chapter
:)