Acrostics

I know that some of the poems have little relevance to the word the spell out.

I love your minimalistic approach Andrew, it's always better to say a lot in few words than nothing in many! My favourite was;

Sometimes
us a humans
ingnore things, we
can not see that
infact,
death is the only way to
exist.

But should the 'a' be 'as' or it can work without and just be 'us humans'.

I also liked:

'how do you see me
an annomaly
that shouldn't
exist?'

Can I just make a suggestion for the punctuation, please feel free to ignore but I feel there should be something after 'me' such as;

'How do you see me?
An annomaly
that shouldn't
exist?'

or

'How do you see me,
an annomaly
that shouldn't
exist?'

Again, they are just suggestions and if this was intentional for a reason I haven't picked up on let me know ;)

Excellent, thought-provoking read!

Magic xxx

Yes, I too enjoyed your minimalist structure. This is a dark, brooding poem made even more so when the acrostic is deciphered. The penultimate stanza, though, remains positive. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for the advice, and yes it is ment to be "us as humans" and also i would punctuate the poems properly if i could edit them, for you see as i have a firewall it will not let me edit these poems.