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Did you see the moon last night

Posted by andrew-evans on November 4, 2009 - 20:02

A silver glow lights the sky
and gleams on my garden pond,
I wish you were here cause
of you im so very found,
we'd dance till sunrise
spend the night together,
basking in the glory
of a beautiful light,
but your not here so i asked you
did you see the moon last night?

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CassandraVishous | November 7, 2009 - 14:29

Aw...Dude this is so sweet! It reminds me of when I'm really missing my boyfriend and I get stupidly upset over it. (Yup, I'm a major cry-baby.)
Loves for the fantastic writing!
--Cass

andrew-evans | August 17, 2010 - 20:19

Nothing wrong with missing the person you love, my girlfriend is going away for two weeks, and i know i'm gunna feel lost without her.