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Posted by andrew-evans on January 6, 2011 - 20:00

Everytime I
Look into you
Eyes,I
See a billion
Happy memories, some only
A split second long
Many
Alot longer, the
Radiance of
Your smile, the
Diamond shine in your eye
Unmatched by others,
Not to mention your touch
Never cold or harsh,
Ever.

I
Love you.
Only you. You're the blood in my
Veins, you're the
Energy in my soul
You complete me, you're
Outstanding and I love you
Undeniably

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Comments

Cavalcaderl | January 6, 2011 - 20:27

new andrew-evans
Really beautiful worded poem
of flowing love.
julie x

jennifer | January 6, 2011 - 22:19

Some great phrasing, such as:

'the
Diamond shine in you(r) eye'

but you need to check some spellings!

J x

insertponceyfre... | January 7, 2011 - 13:47

this is lovely andrew - just radiance left to fix now I think - and veins

andrew-evans | January 7, 2011 - 14:57

Thanks for all the spelling mistake point outs, I really need to start writing in Ms word first, but sometimes i just get inspiration and want to write it straight on here.