Perfect

Those eyes,
a light shade of blue
or dark shade of green,
depending on what you're wearing,
those rosy cheeks
always warm to the touch,
lips that always shine
and sparkle in the sun,
a body that curves
like fine art,
babe if you're looking
for perfection,
in the mirror
is where you should start

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | September 22, 2010 - 22:03

Andrew, I really like the simplicity of this poem - you have a few typos:

what you're wearing

rosy cheeks

always warm to the touch

maggyvaneijk | September 23, 2010 - 15:12

very sweet and genuine.