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Please notice me

Posted by andrew-evans on September 9, 2009 - 19:36
from the ABC set

Please see me
please call my name,
just to remind me
that im not insane,
please notice im here
please don't go away,
it's awfully lonely
could you stay?
Please help me
please keep me going,
just ignore this
tantrum im throwing,
it's just been a bad day
it's just not the same,
please notice me
im not to blame.

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Cavalcaderl | September 9, 2009 - 20:36

New andrew-evans
Love this one
"Please Notice Me"
so true to life, in so many
ways we all want to
be noticed.Nevr mind ages.
Especially to please others whoever, whatever
not always that way.
julie x (:-

kuno-chan | December 12, 2009 - 00:55

i love it. it is how i have felt many a time