The worst thing you could feel
is when everything
you didn't want
happens all at once,
when ever fear,
everything that ever drew a tear,
comes true,
when she swore it would never happen,
when he said he never would,
when they said they never did,
you feel nothing,
your heart stops beating
your lungs stop breathing
and you feel, nothing

Comments
Beeme | August 23, 2010 - 08:26
Very powerful Andrew, I really enjoyed this. Well done :)
Beeme xx
Lennie | August 23, 2010 - 22:52
Andrew this is a great poem and so true I think that everyone has had an experience like this and if not they are really quite lucky!
Again great poem!
Lennie