Skipping through thought
But you don't know why
Your mind corrodes
All down to a lie
Sailing on seas
with a silhouetted mind
A piece is missing
Your heart settles blind
Faces challenge your wall
of fear, their blocked from knowing
as you welcome the New year
Comments
Lady-Bathsheba | January 2, 2010 - 09:40
Angel this is a great write it shows depth and understanding - Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing :)
akanbi | January 2, 2010 - 10:24
Hmm..very nice. Serious, deep stuff. The mystery of consciousness.
You might want to change their to they're