The Child


from the ABC set Concrete Decisions

I expertly recall the moment when
time erupted forth
a son; he stood with unbalanced feet,
impressively short attention span, and
a clear but witty disposition.
His smile, awkward with a slight smirk,
suggested thoughts with potential
but his stance suggested otherwise.
Short, a bit corpulent…his presence was
obvious yet forgettable to most.
He gnawed on his fingertips, chiseled,
chiseled, chiseled until they were raw.
Feet tapping, the sunlight from spring
beamed on him illuminating his soft features.
After what felt like hours of mindless gawking and
scrutinizing of this poor overlooked child,
he winked at me.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | March 9, 2010 - 19:08

An expertly crafted poem, well deserving of its cherry.

Tina

tessdavies | March 11, 2010 - 11:21

I like this very much, nice wittyness about it but
it's also quite disturbing and not totally understandable which, to me, a poem doesn't have to be. I love 'unbalanced feet'