A Keen Nose


from the ABC set A Bit o' Funny

I heard her
when she approached
from the only entrance
to our area.
Boisterous footsteps treading
on worn blue-gray carpet.
Overzealous jewelry swinging
to and fro
from neck and ears.
Clearing her throat, she sat.
Sharing a cubicle wall,
I could not see her...

but I could smell her.

The entire room
collapsed
under the weight of her
perfume.
The fast food lunch
clutched in her hands
enveloped me,
spraying me in scents of
BBQ sauce,
microwaved shrimp,
vegetable oil,
lard.

I winced when
the smell
hit my face.
I strained
like a drowning victim,
trying desperately
to savor the remaining
speckles
of fresh air
lingering
unspoiled
in the stale office air.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | May 3, 2010 - 18:51

Hi - I really enjoyed this poem. You've painted such a vivid picture I can almost smell those horrible things!

shoe | May 3, 2010 - 19:11

this is so true, perfume and fast food, yuk!

Anna Marie | May 3, 2010 - 19:14

Unfortunately a daily smell around here. :(

Glad you enjoyed it.

threeleafshamrock | November 17, 2010 - 13:47

An assault on the nostrils; anyone who has ever worked in an open office environment, will identify; nice one!

Chris ;)