You wake up at six: intercourse with your spouse.
You're under the blanket with tightly shut eyes.
At seven a postman arrives to your house
With two printed portions of scandals and lies.
You turn the TV on. Your damn daily dose
Of lies is exceeded with fresh morning news.
You firmly believe global changes are close -
You have no idea they've hidden the truth.
In life you've achieved less than nothing, you're poor
Though you were the best both at college and school.
Well, man, who are you? You are not even sure.
In fact, you're a pawn in the game of a fool.
Comments
Jupiter | July 17, 2009 - 10:02
Hi April. Some interesting ideas ;-)
I tried to follow your bio link but there seems to be a permissions problem :-)
Further to that I searched via Google for 'freehostwebs' and got a message saying
"Warning - visiting this web site may harm your computer!"
followed by
Advisory provided by
Safe Browsing
Diagnostic page for freehostwebs.com
What is the current listing status for freehostwebs.com?
Site is listed as suspicious - visiting this web site may harm your computer.
Part of this site was listed for suspicious activity 25 time(s) over the past 90 days.
What happened when Google visited this site?
Of the 2075 pages we tested on the site over the past 90 days, 1244 page(s) resulted in malicious software being downloaded and installed without user consent. The last time Google visited this site was on 2009-07-16, and the last time suspicious content was found on this site was on 2009-07-15.
Malicious software includes 101 scripting exploit(s), 11 trojan(s). Successful infection resulted in an average of 5 new process(es) on the target machine.
so it sounds very much like your website is to be avoided and I was very lucky!!
Perhaps a good time to re-site? :-)
russiandoll | July 18, 2009 - 10:50
I think the first two stanzas in this piece are fab and had me anticipating more of the same rhythmn and tone. Third stanza didn't flow so well for me, but that's just my take on it.
April | July 19, 2009 - 19:13
I'm glad you liked it.
As for the website, I'm content with my hosting so far, and I don't know why there are problems, however, I have the same page on Yahoo, and I created a copy of my website on freehostwebs because Yahoo is closing.
http://www.geocities.com/soulofabeautifuldisaster90/Homepage.htm
April | July 19, 2009 - 19:15
Thanks for the response. However, I find the whole writing perfect, otherwise it wouldn't be posted.
Jupiter | July 20, 2009 - 08:16
Hi April.
The geocities link is dead I'm afraid.
Yahoo is closing? I hope not.
April | July 20, 2009 - 19:50
It's not dead yet, and geocities are closing for sure.
Jupiter | July 20, 2009 - 19:56
Hi April - sorry to disagree but if you click on the link you have posted here you get "Sorry, the page you requested was not found." Perhaps the link is wrong?
April | July 21, 2009 - 20:11
I'm very sorry - I've given a wrong link.
http://www.geocities.com/soulofabeautifuldisaster/Homepage.htm