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Beeme, this piece is really touching. Rememberance day piece? If so, then you got your point across in a lovely, sad, sentimental way. Well done, great choice for the name aswell, fits perfectly. I would quote my favorite verse, but the are all fabulous. Just letting you know, I still read your work, just have less time to comment. You're voice in poetry has grown since Jupiter was around. Well done :)I've always loved your poetry and will continue to read yours. I always tell my wife when I really really enjoy your work. She also says your a great writer for your age. x
Take care
Peace
Pinda

Thankyou so much Pinda! Really glad you and your wife enjoy my work x

This is so beautiful and very moving. A more than fitting tribute.

Have a peaceful Sunday, Beeme.

Tina xx

Thankyou Tina! I am so glad you think so. I am not too sure about the last stanza though, doesn't seem to work quite as well, I'll have a think. Have a peaceful sunday to xx

New Beeme
This is amazing piece to
all then lost lives and injured
You could put it in somewhere
and money could go heroes etc;
been watching x Factor
take care late,
Have you bought Abc Mugs yet
I have 2 there great getting
tiny stcikers for it 99p.
julie xx cavalcader (;-

Thankyou Juile, I haven't got a abc mug but sounds good :)

I agree with Tina, a wonderful tribute Beeme and I think the repetition works really well! ;)

Magic xxx

Thankyou magic!

New Beeme
Million well dones on the cherry
On such a very difficult poem
Poppies" to do, so beautifully
done. But you are brilliant so young
poet and can condense all together.
Almost if you lost or knew
someone who died, or injured from wars.
I only thought just now if only all over
the world pray and change whole situation
.
I remember holding a bearer flag is it. when
I was 12 years old at cene'otaph with another
girl from Brit;Red Cross Society then.It was enormous to hold and walk steps I was so short.
Could,t go anywhere this year bug.Last year
stood at one children and elderly man all
his medals took salute and we spoke him
.
"At The Going Down Of The Sun"
And in the early morning to
We will remember them"
and some so young as well
But all someone's loved ones.
oh'
abc mugs under side list !
headings etc; press to
order and pay.
hope your well.xx
julie cavalcader(;

This is one of your best Beeme, deceptively simple use of words. Less is definitely more here. Very well deserved cherry. xxx

Well done beeme, I love alot of our poems but this one stands out from the rest, a really thoughtfull poem great work.

Lennie x

Thanks a millon sarah and lennie! x

Thank you for the cherry abctales.

This

'I hold for you,
the poppy wreath entwined with
your memories.'

and the last line are my favourite in the poem, but the whole thing is just brilliant. Your best so far, in my humble opinion. It's obvious the poem was written from the heart and that is what makes it special. Couldn’t deserve a cherry more. Well done.

Nathan xox

Thakyou so much,Nathan. Your words are greatly appreciated x