Invention

If we talk it is always in double meaning.
Words flung into the air simply to fill the gaps.
Hung up like disregarded clothing,
my blisters stain me with reailty.
Today I walk bare-feet.

The gulls circle the same piece of ground,
searching for answers.
My brother points them out.
Our job is to watch them,
mould the sky like playdo-
form meanings
between the warm palms of our hands.
But there's no room for the secracy of opinion,
we do as we are asked.

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Comments

Highhat | August 9, 2011 - 07:09

My brother points 'then' out. a small typo and
But there's no room for the 'secracy' of opinion,

Very good Beeme
;)Pia

Beeme | August 9, 2011 - 08:12

Thanks pia! x

maggyvaneijk | August 9, 2011 - 12:02

Stunning, filled with startling images like the play dough and disregarded clothing. Wow, you're on a "poetic" roll these days Beeme!

Beeme | August 9, 2011 - 15:17

That means alot coming from you maggy. more than appreciate your lovely comment :) Thank you for the cherry too abctales!

Beeme xx

shoe | August 9, 2011 - 15:21

Wonderful imagery, v,v good poem!!

Beeme | August 9, 2011 - 16:08

thank you very much shoe! x