Bankrupt


from the ABC set Life's Funny Little Foibles

He’s running out of patience
his energy levels low;
he says he’s lost direction
can’t recall which way to go.

He says his heart feels empty
can’t even feel the pain;
each thought that occurs to him
keeps slipping thro’ his brain.

Emotionally bankrupt
feeling insolvent and bust,
he’s entirely without funds
of optimism, love or trust

So I said I’d be banker,
Receivers he wouldn’t need.
I’m his only creditor
though our terms must be agreed.

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Comments

lenchenelf | May 21, 2009 - 21:55

Charming, enjoyed :-) atb Lena

threeleafshamrock | May 24, 2009 - 09:07

Very clever! The rhythm is so tight; very enjoyable. The last stanza, brilliant ;)

Chris XX