Surrounded

Surrounded
A myriad of voices
Drifting by
Living
Moving
I listen
Pieces here and there caress my ears
‘And she texted me that she liked him....’
Lives going on their way
Feeling
‘So we’ll meet for lunch and talk it over...’
Business
Personal
It all passes me by as I sit in silence
I’m surrounded by life
Day by day
Continuous
Regardless of me
Words of love, anger, indifference
‘We haven’t got time...’
Young
Old
Loud
Soft
‘It’s time to go...’
Surrounded

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Comments

jennifer | February 24, 2009 - 18:29

'a myriad of voices', or simply 'myriad voices' is correct...you can't have 'a myriad voices'...

Like the wishy-washyness (technical term, eherm) of the soundscape created, like a drifting conscious...highly effective.

J x

cassiopeia | February 26, 2009 - 16:21

lol thanks, have corrected it :)