THE BRUSH OFF!

This is a brilliant poem, Julie. One of your best I think! I love the message behind it and the imagery in these lines is just superb:

'which would make the skin soft
another brush
with a velvet touch'

and

'Legs that never worked
toes would be curling
from good circulation'

Well done ;)

Magic xxx

I agree with Magic, Julie. You have done really well on this one and your hard work shows.

I like this stanza especially:-

"A machine of dreams
and full of buttons
to make us all brand new!"

Wouldn't mind one of those myself.

Oh and I love the title, by the way. Very clever;-)

Tina xx

Ah Julie, for this I am happy to take the blame, but to you I give the plaudits. A mix of humour and humanity. Great stuff.

David xxxx :--)

new Kheldar
Hello! David, well shows
I read yours, but a lot of this
is 100% true, especially the wheelchair
bit, family and great friend now.
And quite a bit reflects me, an been there.
So tried to make your machine very
comfortable, and enjoyable and funny,
but one time, couldn't do nothing at
all. When I came on here year ago, thinking
just poems, I wasn't going to talk of anything.
Now it is too late? But if some is comforted it
by putting bits on life's experiences mine.
I'll be their agony aunt. I can empathise with
them, for them, and comfort now.
Oh! stop moaning. when I read it I think it is so funny. One has to be there, for families and friend's
but not always, someone there for me.
Only "The Beautiful Hands Of A Priest".
Very wet out. But good. day. Glad you like it. I can feel the pain,of other's. now.
I was part thinking of the film The Time Machine! great. And I did poem called Oh! For a bed for the homeless". part says a car for a bed, as one went by
or pushing the bed, for a collection. And the cow, no! not me, it was in the paper, new way of milking it, instead of by hand. And the nursing homes,sometimes have a switch, turns or rocks the bed. But still, like to see, a machine I mentioned,
your asking? I'd also like, window wipers, miniture
for glasses, first when one drinks things hot, lenses steamed up strange, and the rain?
And a lot of help and comfort on here, engaging
with other's, as Editor tcook aBCtales Tony says.
But can only do up to a certain limit.
bless you
julie xx

Well done Julie, i agree this is one of your best
;)

"Then I would kneel +
and say thankyou
for this wonderful day"

Beautiful!

Nolan
What a lovely comment.
That's what used to do.
I have tears in my eyes,
oh! dear, wipe them away?
And so much more.
Do a romance poem! please.
julie xx

New Silver-spun-sand
What great compliments,
David started it, bit of true
life,and trying to fix some of you in,
but used sell the draw tickets to them.
from church, car wash and everywhere, bit long.
great mental thing to do.
Kheldar David gave me idea.
got to go out, very late.
get back later.
and read all yours, good poet.
I thought calling it silly cow
I was once, just like this machine
all over
Just fitted Beeme in, is it ok.
I have tears in my eyes, at the comments.
Thankyou all you wonderful, AbcTaler's and
I am seriously thinking of "The Big Issue"
put in or local paper, but names are in it
and Editor AbcTales tcook Tony, if they did "The Big Issue" pay and AbcTales headed at the top, so give money to them. But need all permission? idea.
Hectic day, visiting, sent letter PM
Friend in wheelchair one Frank many years, get all free, never thought one has to pay, and for our's if it so, we won't be here. The Troops to come home now?
Free T.v older ones, and all surgical things, and
special pills, exspensive be free.
Thankyou so much.
julie xx
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new darkenwolf
H!. thankyou so much
I never realised most
of it was me, but Kheldars'
David poem, was a machine,
so it greatly inspired me
to do. Try and work in AbcTaler's
names that mentioned. In his.
But I am more an agony aunt.
I wish with all my heart, in a
very nice way, your title darkenwolf
could be more ligthened for you, help you.
maybe. Maybe "The Sun Searcher" or
"The Sun Seeker". what do you think!
No offense mean't, may help you.
Or just say no, mind my own business. ok
Mean't in a nice way possible. Like reading
your's you have the way, keep writing.
julie xx

With love Julie find me in the slipstream &&

new Nolan
Thankyou, couldn't find word
dictionary, mine, said I asked him
in the room, means protected. I answered a post
hadn't heard of, and got Guardian
Angel, back to-day, keyring, and angel
labels. lucky me. Send small donation help
children etc; water and writing to learn.
Lost comment to you, so done again.
thank's
julie x

julie once i sought always the light but the light was forever forbidden to me. Now there is only the darkness. I am and always shall be the Darkwolf.
But i appreciate the thoughts and no i don;t mind them at all write whatever you feel and you can't go far wrong
:)

new darkenwolf
thankyou for the comment.
Oh! I see. Enjoy your stories.
I do know, what you mean.
julie x (:-

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new MistakenMagic
Hi! Magic, Rebecca,
removed this now, and put under your
comment. Your notice better.
Thankyou for all your help. Do keep
in touch on AbcTales.
Thought I saw an umbrella with cherries
on got to counter it was baby roses,
so didn't buy it.
julie xx