I'm a seagull I have eaten so many worms and bits and breadcrumbs I have a job to take off up into the clouds. I stop on a thatched roof little birds hanging on their claws but I'm beginning to tilt. I fly on and a kite is quite near me I'm going to get entangled I must try to fly around it I can see morris dancers banging and waving hankies there's a top of a van with a covered statue of a dolphin I can see chimney's and black smoke coming out and ah! a chimney sweep brush cars parked and bicycle tied up a church spire, tennis court and it's starting to rain a cafe in the distance people are eating ice-creams some are carrying carrier bags and wearing tops with cats and birds on children are eating candy floss oh! dear I have dropped on someones hat they say it is lucky?
Now I am back on the high roof top again a huge giant plane nearly blowing me off and a milk float clattering down below the noise is scary I can see a helter skelter, can-can dancers in all bright colours on the pier, I can hear the bang of the rifle range going pop! bang! to win a toy some have large pigs and cows to win and a baby dolphin, oh! dear I am so tired I am starting to close my eyes and nod of. I have found a crack in the roof ledge to perch from the cold and wet to-night but I managed to keep awake to see all these things.
IMAGINATION
Posted by Cavalcaderl on July 8, 2009 - 21:05
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SundaysChild | July 9, 2009 - 12:29
I really liked this- you have a vivid imagination!
Some great imagery here.
Keep it up!
sarah wilson | July 11, 2009 - 13:32
I love the ideas in here Julie, but it is hard to read with so little punctuation. Some lovely imagery.
sarah x
sarah wilson | July 14, 2009 - 07:38
Well I'm glad you do - you bring something fresh and different to the site. sarah x
Cavalcaderl | July 14, 2009 - 18:33
new SundaysChild gee the old girl is pleased but our writing group homeless we have pictures word or sentences and titles imagination. t.cook I see says we are all meant to answer each others comments I wish more would mine it's exhausting getting it all right! "Summer" Poem is also in The Big Issue this week 2nd one new co-ordinator young in 2 weeks there in, gods amazing? Silver-Spun-Sand helped me to get Cherry brooch but I always wear my cross. Jennifer mentioned to many dots and dashes etc; hard for me but gave me 1st comment.god bless it's like horse racing you get a tip sometimes right sometimes wrong mine mostly true and meanings to them. thankyou. I cried my 1st cherry. I stored all up in £1 file from writing group till I saw Abctales in paper for red dress park bench entry did 5. then gradually putting these on sometimes not even checked you can tell. more comments please all of you. last 3 years and homeless on Odeon room film cinema huge when we appeared on it was run and hosts I have a job believe all this happeningthey all so good dancing singing poetry photos love reading other works
cavalcaderl julie x at first I didn't know about commenting. or words stanza and others. bless you.
cavalcaderl julie x
Lennie | July 16, 2009 - 19:28
Hey really like the story, keep up the good work, looking foward to reading more of your work :)
Lennie
Cavalcaderl | August 8, 2009 - 22:45
new Lennie wow I have a real job to see
something someone appreciates even though
not always in right text.We have pictures
list words to put into verse or story and
homeless go we get paid little bit if in
The Big Issue my latest is called "Summer"
I did comp; 1st time Abctales 5 then put
on what had in £1 file.But strangely all
so kind at Abc and t. Cook for letting me do so.
I could't take comments at first as
in all adversity this happened.thankyou
keep comments coming.Love reading all
julie x.
Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2009 - 03:42
new Sarah wilson thanks comment I never had an imagination, etc; but my Priest+ one day taught me read bible took many years to pray Motto was "pick yourself up and dust yourself down and start all over again" in all adversities.gave me permission use his name,Fthr Alan.Plus other professional names. and go for it! as hubby never backed me in anything much younger me. But now as you will see most stories and poems on here have 2nd meaning to them? Then writing group and many other things. groups singing, dancing acting we all did and over 50's now"The Big Issue" 2 in. and homeless get paid bit. "The Argus "do free Poets Corner letters page.Waiting "Green Eyes" go in
didn't know about Stanzas and commas etc. just did 5 comp. My readings after 3 at 1st! I prayed comment in month prayed for comment. shot to four figures in a month and blow me cherry! from lovely cherry pickers. especially as hubby's humour told me had one week beforoe not true !he had drawn one on silly thing to do! Jennifer said doen't have to rhyme concentrate?? on images. but we have pictures to look into writing group and homeless and now I buy and can read a lot, and list words and put into sentence or poem what? god is amazing. bless you and I'm getting on now never to old to learn something new or try?"please Read !Oh for a bed for the homeless" "My Sunshine" permission any professional names used"Silence is golden""My (The Princess true )touch! This is his computer? and once belated Mum got us in "Cavalcade" Theatre Royal met stars and celebs; Jeremy Clyde" once saw and met all Hi!De H1 back stage fab; and spoke "Lionel Blair,"great and "Les Dennis" etc. and signatures. gobsmacked as extras.my and recently writing groups do varities things not professional film men come and put us on Odeon and hosts issue oscars and certificates out The Bill Chris Ellison host this year. and have dvd and books amazing, and read and see all there works, like hear !now.someone put good, but bit child like not bad 1st go. Readings in 4 figures show someone likes them. wanted just to let someone see and read. julie Cavalcaderl x