"Strange Behaviour" True

I was sitting on the back seat of
the bus the other day

As some are to low
When I noticed
someone
lives not far

I caught them up
"I haven't seen you for sometime"
"Oh1
I am busy here and there"

So I mentioned poems
and what had been going on

Daughter and hubby
No! flight for Spain
Cos' of the volcano
Erupting again.

Suddenly
they said
"Excuse me

Got to go on
I have
diarrhoea"

I hurried and nearly
caught them up

Blow me they went
into the shop!
so of course she would talk

If they were in a hurry
and a windy day!

Surely should have gone
home right away!

So naughty!
me
called out
"I have seen you
talk to other's

So I won't bother next time"
they ain't no friend of mine!.

I would have to run home quick
if fear or fright.
Have you met anyone with
strange behaviour?.

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Comments

Highhat | April 24, 2010 - 09:18

hmm try a little proof reading before publishing. Things get hung up on that as well :o)

Cavalcaderl | April 24, 2010 - 14:12

Highhat
Thanks for that,yes,I really
should,as if someone kindly alters something,I have few scribblings and previous copy, can get lost.
Or me trying put, versions in correct poem story
I don't get time,write out first,be thousands times
better wouldn't it,if he has t.v. etc;concentrations not good..
julie x

Highhat | April 24, 2010 - 18:50

You must not hurry along too much Julie relax a while and concentrate on your poetry. You can do it very well
kind regards pia

Nolan | April 25, 2010 - 01:10

“Have you met anyone with
strange behaviour?.”

Like you won’t believe &&

Cavalcaderl | April 27, 2010 - 20:48

new Highhat
Yours so kind.If
stop in,and don't slow down.
Can't ever catch up with time
So blow it all, and out Summer time now.
I ran for a bus,stop altered further at
moment,crossed road went whizzing by.
Three quarters hour had to wait one day.
So had to walk,and divert to get bus other
area.Into town.Road works maybe.
Love title "Highhat" reminds me words?
"Grab Your Hat and leave your coat".etc;.

Cavalcaderl | April 30, 2010 - 10:21

Nolan
Now and again.
Nothing to outlandish.
I think most have something,
some pick their noses.
I expect many have,have you then?
Changing world and times now
Victorians men and women,dressed
divine,and wigs and snuff.Would
haved had a lot habits.One can't go
by appearances can they.Got too cut all
mine down,more like chat show, or agony aunt.
By me,think meant to be poetry,and stories isn't it.
odd comment line.But I like conversing with all
paper states pick noses,baked beans and worse
julie x

Nolan | August 1, 2010 - 22:48

There's method in the madness

Cavalcaderl | August 2, 2010 - 14:44

new Nolan
Yes,very true,they
don't know I made up this.
Just seen you kindly left comments,so
catch up later.Overdone it a bit. Tight
belt round the waist new trousers on.
Hipsters not long to waist thought they were.
Hope your ok.
julie x