The watch keeps moving as I stand still,
Life in a letter, How does it feel?
The wind's a whistle to my ear,
Breathless, alone, wandering in dark places.
We shadow the movements, chase the dream,
We're getting there, getting where?
one is together,
two is a cure,
three is the answer to,
seven minus four.
If you open windows, don't forget your door.
Comments
kuno-chan | July 17, 2010 - 05:37
thats interesting chosen. i really like it. its deep.
----Kuno-Chan----
The Chosen One | July 17, 2010 - 17:36
thank you very much, appreciate the comments
jennifer | July 17, 2010 - 21:26
Great last line, but what happens to the capital letters in the third stanza?
I confess, I'm a little confused by the title, but still..
J x
The Chosen One | July 18, 2010 - 21:51
The capital letters always slip my mind, just like memories and names. Nice to hear from you again.
Cavalcaderl | July 22, 2010 - 22:58
new The Chosen One!
Just clicked on,seen
you got a cherry!well deserved.
Like this,but I can't fathom out six
What a good name.
julie
The Chosen One | July 23, 2010 - 00:01
thank you Julie,
If you cannot fathom it,
How could I?
The cherry was not for the poem,
It was for the tree.