The Arrow

Posted by Chris Whitley on April 23, 2009 - 14:44
from the ABC set Chris Poems

I once had an arrow
so straight it couldn't miss
I shot it deep into her heart

But now I see it lying there
broken on the ground
The point I can not find

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Comments

Simple but thoroughly poignant. I love how well the two separate stanzas work as opposites ;) Well done!

Magic xxx

Thank you very much for taking the time Magic.
Chris