Here With Her

Less is more, cormacru, as you demonstrate here, so well.

Tina

Even though I write some long poems, I appreciate the short ones most. I like them when they're short and clear.

I like this one very much - well done

New cormacru999
Yes, I enjoyed so small and all
compact, with the sun and a beautiful girl.
I should really try cut mine down learning think.
Congrats: on the cherry!
julie

sometimes I write out a big long piece and then leave it alone for a few month, until I'm not attached to the work as much. and then I tear out all the extra and see what's left. often that's the best way for me to figure out what I'm really trying to say. If its not a story, then it should just be a statement.

Yes this is a very clear statement C999- short and very sweet- so simply put and yet poignant.
Beautiful

;)Pia

I agree - this is so, so sweet indeed, congrats on the cherries, such a beautiful little poem :)

I've been very lucky on this site to be picked so often. I'm really appreciative and grateful for the attention and the compliments. joining this site has been very rewarding. I look forward to reading more of everyone's work as well. thank you.

Very sweet. As said before sometimes less is more

Simplicity is romantic, excellent.
IWx