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Posted by darkoe2lh2k on August 10, 2010 - 01:51
from the ABC set Survivor of mental health: abuse and torment

Little cat why do you weep
Never smile and never sleep
Are you still trapped inside that box
Dressed so poorly where are your socks
Curled up your body into a ball
Rocking slowly," watch you'll fall"
You dont deserve the guilt you hold
Its not your fault your pure as gold

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Comments

shoe | August 10, 2010 - 15:48

This is lovely, 'dont' should be don't and the last 'your' I think is you're, minor things in a very nice poem.

darkoe2lh2k | August 10, 2010 - 16:12

ty kindly