Shared Vision - 30 Word IP

We talk long sentences of
future times we’ve yet to have.

These taste rosy on our tongues;
tales spun out of dreams;
hypothetical schemes without means
to fulfil a single one.

Aren’t dreams fun?

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | April 2, 2009 - 11:43

Another 'cracker'! There are some really good pieces coming from this weeks I.P. and this is one of them; well done!

Chris

Dynamaso | April 2, 2009 - 23:52

Thanks, mate. I agree; there are some excellent pieces. Glad you think this is one of them.