I won’t play this game,
it’s boring and the same
as all the other ones
you’ve brought to the table.
It would be nice for a change
if you didn’t act so strange
and let go of the past
if you’re at all able.
You’re a wrecking ball,
crashing through my walls
even after I’ve invited you in;
you just can’t help yourself.
I think you’ve lost the plot
to the only tale you’ve got,
I’ve heard it all before,
every single time you said it.
Look at it from a different view,
be inspired by something new
cause let’s be honest here,
you’re not getting any younger.
You’re a wrecking ball,
crashing through my walls
even after I’ve invited you in;
You just can’t help yourself
This can’t be good for your health
Why not take it easy
Let it go
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | February 22, 2011 - 11:27
Like this one, Dynamaso. Very much. The repetition works, excellently and adds to the almost compulsive driving beat you have so expertly crafted in the writing of this poem.
Enjoyed;-)
Tina
Dynamaso | February 22, 2011 - 11:58
Hey Tina, thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated. I particularly enjoy playing this one too, so it might be the first I record.
MistakenMagic | February 22, 2011 - 20:42
Love the 'wrecking ball' image! I'd really love to hear a recording if you ever get round to it ;)
Magic xxx
Dynamaso | February 23, 2011 - 00:10
Thanks Magic. I am hoping to record these soon and will let you all know when I'm done.